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for Marry Boy

by JonasFleischer

person dut
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so sweet! Thats pretty mature of Breannan though.. Adopting a baby at that age.. Happy ever after.... hey since you right so well.. i hope you would have the inspiration to write a fantasy or gothic slashes in the future too... Gambate!
person animekid
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very good; i love the culture clashes as well as the love, drama, and tension!

Wonderfully put out and writen; I cannot wait to see the end :D
person Anna Belle
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm too sad. This story is finish. I can't believe it. I'm going to miss your writing. This was one of the best stories I've read in a long time. So please write another one soon.
person Lisa
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow - It's so refreshing - someone finished a story - thank you! Bravo on Marry Boy - good story! You have quite a talent for writing! Looking forward to you next story.
person elyn
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Happy ending! *does a little dance* Woohoo for your first book...novel...whatever. Anyway, it was a good one. I really enjoyed the whole story, even the second time around. Hope to read more from you sometime.
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great!
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love happy endings!
person Anna Belle
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to update. I'm so sad to see this story almost finished. Hopefully you'll write a new one soon.
person dut
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! the war finally end! Naruhito is save and goin back home! Can;t wait for the next chapter
person Lisa
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story - excellant, very good! Saw your blurb about finishing this one before starting another - thank you - I'm so glad to hear someone say that.

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