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Wow, I really love this!! It'd be great to see you continue it! Awesome! ><

Write more please?

GOOD LUCK!!

it's sooooo cute.........*sobs of joy*

That's just the cutest ever!!! Awe!!! i can't stop smiling after reading that ending!!! Great job on the story!

Such a sweet ending for the two. I quite enjoyed this story. I hope they have a rich and full life ahead. *giggle*

I've been missing in action for a little while and this is the first story I read upon my return!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this ending and story!!! Thanks for writing it! I haven't forgotten I'm supposed to find out if a publisher would touch the story once it was on the internet. I've just been insanely busy and none of the agents have called me back.

Love the story!

this is a great story, and i'm really happy you were able to finish it so quickly. the only problem i have is that in the last couple of chapters, with the battle, there's no sense of a passage in time. I mean, in the last chapter, you're talking about months that he was on the battle front, and a lot of letters he received from breannan. but i didn't get the sense that months had passed while he was there, so it really threw me off when you said that. before i read the last chapter, i figured he'd only been out there a couple of days. anyway, hope to read another one from you soon. keep up the great writing, and post again soon.

Aww, so sweet! I'm sad I didn't read it sooner. I loved everything about it - I could actually see this as a real novel. There were a few spelling mistakes, very few, mostly the wrong word use(like I think one was halt instead of hilt) - but I maybe saw three in all fourteen chapters, so wonderful job. I can't wait to see more of your work.

that's it no more, atleast give me an epilougue!!!!!

love from,

her imperial majesty, 13