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awww the end of chap 3 is cute... i hope it ends well for the two of them :) hurry hurry with the next update :D

Glad your re-posting this gem, as I'd love another read of it!!

Thanks!
R

Why has Breannan been whipped? And by who, his father? But yet, he still shows a rebellious side to his nature. And the evidence of bruising means he was held down forcefully by someone. His brothers, maybe? Perhaps its just as well that Breannan has been married off. A lucky escape from his family.
Will the two newly weds convince their families that the marriage has been consumated? Won't a lack of blood on the bedsheets be contrary to what they state? Or will no one be concerned enough to check for such evidence?
Really good. I'm enjoying this story immensly.

I'm really curious about what Naruhito and Bre. come up with; looking forward to the next update!

I'm glad to see more of this fic; Uisdean's interest is fun; thanks for the update!

Please let me know there's more to come. Going by the reviews others have left, it seemes that there is, but by having the word, 'Finished', in your summary, does that mean you are not posting the rest of the chapters?
I'd really like to be able to read the rest of it if its possible. I think you have a super little story here, and I'd love to know more...

i'm confused

ok i think you updated your other fic here

I really like this story, I may be wrong but I do re-call reading this story awhile back and it had more then one chapter. The 2nd chapter was about the reception and little by little the groom found himself feeling protective over Brennen. He certainly did not like his new in-laws at all what with the way they would imtimidate his new male wife. I remember reading the last chapter how the brothers forced Brennen into the staples to play thier cruel games of rape and abuse. Does this souund like your story? Did it get taken down and re-posted? I wish I could remember if you are the same author, but if you are I am hooked on this story and can't wait to find out what happens next. Thank you.

i'm intrigued by this fic... is there anywhere else I can read more of it?