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Poor Breannan, hopefully someone will come along to rescue him

Chapter Six

That kid is so abused!!! OMG!!!
And confused!!! Poor thing!!!
His bros. suck!!!

Will his new husband beat the living crap out them?!!!
(Hope so!)

Thanks,
R

omg best story ever! update please please please T,T why didnt they do the do...cant wait till the next chapter.

The joining of the two cultures is a great idea. This is indeed an interesting story. I just love Breannan. Please update as soon as you can.

Oh....they've got to the first touchy feely stage. Naruhito is feeling proud of himself, but Breannan isn't! If he's making all this fuss and noise at a little petting session, Naruhito had better prepare himself with some earplugs if he ever decides to consumate the marriage lol
Just a few little things I spotted while reading.

After dinner he would find Okimi and they would start what they had finished.***** Myself, I would have wrote it the other way about...they would finish what they had started....

He was going to have to sit down and explain *hat* (that) before the youth

The hush of whispered voices *lead* (led) him forward

“Good day, *prince*,” (Prince) Uisdean said, giving him the smallest of *bow*. (bows)

“This marriage is real,” he whispered against his ear, afraid his normal voice would be a bit *to* (too) breathy

His *suddenly* (sudden) calmness was unsettling,

I really, really like this story...I think it's great.

Chapter 4-5

I realize now that I never found this story again after chapter 3!!
This will be my first time reading this!! Yahoo!!!

Breannan is very funny with all his monk comments. Luckily his new
princely, husband is a mature man!!! Lucky, lucky, lucky!!
(Has his family abused him?)

Thanks,
R

thanks for the update!

Oh my goodness...for a moment there, I thought Naruhito was going to let Okimi take care of his early morning needs. Loved the way he kept picturing Breannan doing those things instead. And I'm impressed with Naruhito's level of self control! Lol...
Still say the servants are going to gossip among themselves though, when they notice that the bed sheets don't really need changing.
Pondering over when, and why, Breannan was whipped. What did he possibly do, to warrant such an extreme form of punishment from his family? Well, they are there for at least another week, so maybe some answers will be revealed soon....

Well if he can have a mistess, Breannan should get some freedom too; thanks for the update!

please update this story soon. i read this the first time around and i really love it and would love to read it again. -L