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CHAPTER 2
Hi, schmetterling,
This story looks familiar, as well as your name. Did you have a story called 'Cherry blossoms' or 'Under cherry blossoms' posted before? On a different site, maybe? I am pretty bad with remembering fic names, but 'Marry Boy' contents are familiar, although I don't think that there were many chapters posted before.

I really like this story, specifically that the Japanese guy is a seme, so to speak. Usually people write them as a uke. Really well written, good descriptions and dialoque.

Thank you for posting it, I'll be reading this for sure:)

I love it so far! You write so well! Poor Breannan I really hope that the whole abuse things stopped, I wonder which one it was in his family that did that to him. Thats just horrible, and whipping too... ahh but no worries Naruhito will save him!

What can I say? Another great chapter. Naruhito already getting jealous and possessive. And Breannan ... poor little wife. Can't wait to see how their 'affair' turns out. Job well done!

The story is really good. The plot is interesting and original.I also like your writing style a lot. "The wife" is such a cute kid. NO wonder, he was resisting so much , to be married by a stranger, a foreigner, a male one -? that's like a surreal nightmare. His family sold him out.
There was enough of tension in this chap too. It was like : who will (S)he be a brute or a brute? And then this little sweet screaming and kicking boy apears. It is like ,thank godness, ...oh and this is going to be so great... and amusing :)

Wow that sucks for both of them! They should work together to make their families suffer... After they get over arguing with each other first of course. ^^; I think this story will be interesting. Even thought the plot is cliche the story seems original. Most people would have put the japaneses man as the 'wife' role because of the races tendency to a short stature. They also would have put the scot as the 'husband' role because they tend to be stereotyped as big buff swordsmen. I like that you switched it up. It will be interesting to see them interact. Also a question: where are they going to live scotland or japan? Please continue!
ja ne

oh this seems very interesting, I'm so glad I started reading it ^_^ That is an odd situation; getting married and only finding out at the spot that hiss 'wife' is infact a man! I really can't wait to see what happens next; how they are going to pull their marriage through.

Yay, This story combine two of my favorite things. Highlanders and Japanese Bishounens.
I'm so happy.

Hello,

What a nice story you have here! Certainly a very good beginning and I do look forward to another chapter. There are a few things that got me thinking but ... I will ask them some other time, fear not, I will. For now I'm letting you off the hook, haha!

Ok, I will be finishing and keep up good work.

teeta

I remeber reading this story before. I love it^-^ I started thinking about it the other day and debating if I should go dig it up or not. Thanks for saving me the trouble.