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for Marry Boy

by JonasFleischer

schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew I'd read (and loved) this story before! I'm so glad I'm not crazy, or that someone didn't plagerize your awesome story. Reading it and trying to spot the changes from the previous version have kept me awake far longer than I'd planned, but I can't resist. I'm looking forward to the next update.
person Laaerie
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hoh!!! Another great chapter!!! I had this bad feeling about Breannan's stupid brothers, so you just confirmed it for me :D ---- great great great.... and it seems there's more to come!!! (in more than one sense -- muaha!) Thanks for the update!

Laaerie
person elyn
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't remember whether I read this or not when it was there before. It's sooo sad! And poignant. I just want to give him a big hug. Poor little guy. Anyway, it was a good chapter, and I liked the switch to Breannan's point of view. Can't wait for the rest!
person Anna Belle
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He's having sex with his brothers while he's married?
person dutsada
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story!!!!!! It is just my type!!! So cute!
person elyn
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this story when it was posted before and really liked it. I hope I reviewed before, too, but I can't remember. I'm trying to be better about reviewing everything I read, whether I like it or not. Lately, nearly everything I've been reading has been enjoyable, including this story! :o) As I said, I enjoyed it the first time I read it, and now reading the first two chapters has me eagerly waiting for the rest, even if the story stays mostly the same. I suddenly got a craving to read the whole thing again, so I guess I'll just have to wait patiently. Keep up the good work! :o)
person teeta
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, I haven't read this story before. And I've enjoyed every single line of this chapter. I can say only this much - wonderful job ^___^
person Laaerie
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is not cool! I had done a great review and this thing cut it!!! ggggrrrr... So... *getting composed* I was... In a great mood before, saying I loooove this story! has great character development, great plot with lingering secrets, good SMUTT (an important thing *nods nods*) and even though I had not reviewed it before, I would gladly kneel down here and beg for more *puppy eyes* :P And I really hope this one goes through!

Laaerie
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to be reading this story again. You have no idea. Yes, I think you should add This Nary Be Love as a chapter^-^
person Kiira
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated, I was hoping that you would, kept checking on it ^_^ The kid surely fihts a lot and now I'm really curious of that mysterious Scot that he was with and curious about those scars. Glad that Naruro is starting to come around to him! Can't wait for the chapter 3.