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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Breannan is hiding so much from his husband. He needs to come clean so they can move.
Also, you refered to Naruhito's Sword as a Katakana. I'm sure if you meant Katana b/c Katakana is the japanese syllabary. It's a form a writing. Well look into it just to be sure.
Nice progression so far.
Also, you refered to Naruhito's Sword as a Katakana. I'm sure if you meant Katana b/c Katakana is the japanese syllabary. It's a form a writing. Well look into it just to be sure.
Nice progression so far.
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you meant 'per se' not 'parse.' Just a hunch.
I am looking forward to what happens next ^.^ Hope you hurry.
I am looking forward to what happens next ^.^ Hope you hurry.
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARggghhh...those brothers make me angry! I'd really just like to...kick them (or cut them, hee hee hee) where it would hurt the most. They deserve it!! Anyway, had to get that out of my system! I always have something to get out of my system after I read a story, whether it's hyperness or anger. Today it just happened to be anger! :oP
I think Naruhito is doing well by keeping himself in check. Maybe they'll eventually come to an understanding. Except those thoughts of his. Bad! *shakes finger accusingly* He needs his mind washed out with soap. Ha ha, who am I kidding? Of course I want him to act on the thoughts, but poor Breannan needs to understand what real love is first, and that it doesn't have to be physical. Poor kid. I like him better when he's being a brat, just like Naruhito thought. :oD
I think Naruhito is doing well by keeping himself in check. Maybe they'll eventually come to an understanding. Except those thoughts of his. Bad! *shakes finger accusingly* He needs his mind washed out with soap. Ha ha, who am I kidding? Of course I want him to act on the thoughts, but poor Breannan needs to understand what real love is first, and that it doesn't have to be physical. Poor kid. I like him better when he's being a brat, just like Naruhito thought. :oD
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, sorry for not reviewing the previous chapter. You haven't lost me as your reader and reviewer,I am still both. Chapter 4 was ... poor Breannan! Those two stupid jerks! No wonder he wants to be a monk!
I hope prince Naru will eventually get to punish those two sickos. And the bath scene was really neat!
Loved both chapters! Looking forward to another installment!
teeta
I hope prince Naru will eventually get to punish those two sickos. And the bath scene was really neat!
Loved both chapters! Looking forward to another installment!
teeta
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Those stupid Brothers! I hope Naruhito will find our soon and get them! but then again I know that won;t heppen yet huh.. Anyhow excited for the next chapter!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ung!!! No! you can't stop there!!!!! :D Great chappie!!! Hope you're writing the next one already :P and I hope that at least two scots are castrated next tooooo... :D
Laaerie
Laaerie
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What happened in the stabbles? did he get rape or did he have sex with his brothers willingly?
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouch - the poor kid actually thinks what his brother did was love.
No wonder he doesn't like the concept...
No wonder he doesn't like the concept...
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!!!! Its so my type... but poor Breanen.. not only he got forced into a marriage his brother still picks on him!!! Thank God he is not violated down there though... well excited for the next chapter! Update soon please~