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AWW the prince is sooo sweet!

I'm first I'm first!!! Great chappie!!! aaawww Naruhito is melting for Breannan!! and his family better leave soon! so there would be smut!! smut!! yep... did I mention SMUT?! sorry I'm tired and this is a silly review!! but you know I love the story, right?!

Laaerie

Update soon please and I'm still waiting for what happened between Breannan and his family...

oh no don't stop there please.more please

CHAPTER 7
Hi, schmetterling,
This is the part of the story I don't remember, so reading it for the first time:)

I like it a lot, proticularly the way Prince Naruhito is handling things. I like the fact that he chose Breannan's wishes over their families'. He seems to be a very decent guy.

Being a monk for a week might be an eye-opening experience for Bre, he might decide that he doesn't like it as much. He wanted to escape his families abuse for a long time, but now Naruhito is his family, so things are different:)

I am glad that you are taking extra care and editing this cool story. That is what good writers do:) Take your time, things will be better in RL, hopefully.

So far I had a lots of fun reading this fic:-D
Hug Schuldig for me, hehe!

Thank you.

this is such a nice story. the main charachters really come alive in your writing. Thank you it was a treat!

ugh.... angsty!!! kill them all scots!!! (not racist but int his case... it ifts :D) well all except breannan!!! OK... now you give me more chappies!!!

Laaerie

Wow, I really don't remember that part from the last time I read this. Hm, my memory must be bad, or you've changed some of it. Anyway, I liked it whether it was there before or not! Poor Breannan. I'm afraid I'll be thinking that a lot throughout the entire story. I like that Naruhito is starting to care about him, whether he wants to or not! :o) Can't wait for more!

Well, so it's not only his brothers who abuse Breannan but his father as well. Hm, I hope it's not that bad in this case but ... if Breannan did something like that, actually started to initiate ... it must have been pretty bad, huh?

Can't wait for Naruhito to finally kick those brothers' asses. Poor Breannan.

Loved the chapter, want another asap. Please?

This is an excellent story! I'm completely loving it... but I want the boy to be able to go to the damn temples and I want his asshole family to get what's coming to them... See what you can do about it? LOL..

Anyway... I wanted to know what you mean by you lost first rights to this story because you put it on a website? All the publishers I've talked to don't mind if the story was online... In fact one publisher even said you could use it as a way to get the story published in your author's bio as an accomplishment.

As a person who wants to get published I'd be interested in what you know about the subject.

Good Story... keep writing! Update soon!!