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person VicRia
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg, wow, this ones very aweso-terrific -ome!! XD I cant wait to read you other stories!! Good job!
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was cute. i like your stories they are so simple yet so fuzzy. I'm guessing the next one will be about Lani and Ryan. but i do remember you saying soething about Jacy and ryan becoming closer...could there be a twist??? well i hope you update soon.
person Ashlynn
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally. the whole day i was waiting for your update.
wow. they got married? didnt see that coming. great story. it is a lovely ending.
but once again you left us hanging even in the epilogue. you are really really mean. j/k
cant wait to read the next series.
person Ashlynn
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man, you left us hanging again. i want to know what is joe's reaction to stephanie's confession.
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Probably like most readers, I'm hating Joe right now. But being a realist, I know that people make mistakes they're not perfect and can sometimes be forgiven, so I'm really looking forward to seeing how Joe manages to make up for being a complete asshole.

Please update soon.
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the first real meeting between Joe and Stephanie. You've done such a great job of giving your characters depth. I must admit that in your first story, Stephanie was my least favourite because she just seemed so shallow. And even though that element of shallowness is still there, we can see that there is definitely more to her. Can't wait for some more interaction between these two.
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me again!!!

I've been thinking alot about your characters... (I have no life), and for some reason I have this feeling about Jacy and Ryan. I know up to this point they haven't had any interaction yet, but I feel that having Lani and Ryan would be so obvious that maybe putting Jacy and him together would be good. I guess it would depend on whether or not Ryan could get over being so superficial and see more in Jacy... and see past Lani and her beauty.

Anyhow, guess I will have to wait and see.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bumbumbummmmmmmmm.....lol i cant wait to read what happens next...its nice to see them actually human....keep up the great work
person Ashlynn
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I purposely register so I can tell you that I really love your series. Im loving it. I cannot wait to see what happen to Stephanie and the other girls. Keep up with the great work.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that's so sweet! Thanks everyone so far for the wonderful reviews!