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for The Unicorn and the Thief

by Kawanee

person Al
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story but please please update sooner!
I just love Regan!!!
person dutsada
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is a very interesting story! Hope you can update soon! I am excited to know Regan's progress~
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Regan is so cute:) And brilliant too. He learns human language at unimaginable rate. Is it because he has heard it before, or is he just a prodigy?
BTW, how old is Regan?Also, if it is 10 or 100 or stuff like that,when aprocimately how old is he in human years? Doc seems lik such a nice guy, but what about the rape - did he not wanted to mention it in fron of the girl, or did he actually missed it??? One more question, people do know about the unicorns don't they? Sorry , for being so annoying :)
P.S. Leave lil unicorn some of his super powers, please :)
P.S.S. Thanks for 'good luck' I actualy managed to get 89 from the biochemistry :) (stupid proteins)
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wait... about that birthday? Is it yours?? Is so, have all the sweets and balloons!In any case ,have lots of fun:)
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 2
Wow, Kawanee, a unicorn? I've read the description 'A unicorn loses his innocence in a case of mistaken identity' and actually thought that that was a human/animal sort of fic. But there weren't any warnings about it. He was actually in a human form! *relieved sigh* It would be too creepy other way:)

I like this fic already, written really well. Interesting plot, that part, where he felt the change to a mortal human, was so sad. And that part where he cryed for his father. Is he going to have any special abilities and extra strength, or he just became a regular boy? I wonder about that bond thing, is it permanent? Is he supposed to be with Bedell now? I hope not.

This is truly original, in fact, I can't remember any other unicorn fics. Hope to see more of it:)
person Kiira
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes we all love reviews so here's one for you ^.^ I enjoed the chapter very much. Poor boy; so confused and can't even speak the human language right... and he is bonded with that drunk afoul man?! Well yes, I feel sorry for the kid. Waiting for the next chapter!
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was just great!! Obviously it was, as my humble-self never reviews ,unless, eager for more. But, that's what's so great about these great stories - they smack lazy persons into their heads or asses - and here these slackers are, rushing to adore the author.
I really thought you won't be able to pull this up. Seriuosly , horses? and sex? that's just brr... (not my kinkiness level, I suppose).
But, I really like it. Really!!
Anyway, my biochemistry exam is tommorow and I am as good as dead if I don't start studying now. Just, a few more praises and I'll go..
Student's and studying they just don't go together...
...Wonderful story , bye bye update asap , pretty please (I'll even pass this stupid exam for you :))
person PyTerato
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww that's so sad! His poor innocence! His poor father! His poor ass!

I really liked this chapter. Well written and tragic. Regan's a lil cutie, ain't he? Long live androgyny!

~C~
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!!!!!!
person Kiira
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is an interesting beginning for a story! When I started reading I didn't know what to expect. I was like what; horses? A slash story about horses? Then I thought; alright, just keep on reading, remembering the time when as a child me and my best friend always played with toy pony's and horses just like others would play with barbies. I didn't like barbies, I thought they were boring...

Um so ANYWAY!

So he changed into a human form; I must say that I'm glad that he did, even after all that blabbering about the toy ponies, lol. But poor guy! and the rapist confused him for a girl, was he drunk or what? lol. So now he has to stay in human form, away from his family? Poor guy indeed.

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

(and sorry about this weird review, hehe)

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