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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The meeting between ex- and step-father is inevitable. The unicorn king Vs Doc :)Sould be fun...
Poor Regan , getting worse as the day passes by. Yet, I have to agree with Morgan death is a blessing compared to a mate like Bellel. Doc could still kick his ass ,though,just give no explanations.... :) Well ,I hope the seme will do this job.
Awesome. Please ,continue.
Poor Regan , getting worse as the day passes by. Yet, I have to agree with Morgan death is a blessing compared to a mate like Bellel. Doc could still kick his ass ,though,just give no explanations.... :) Well ,I hope the seme will do this job.
Awesome. Please ,continue.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please please update sooner!!!
It´s so great!!!
It´s so great!!!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating the story. Poor Regan . . . having to suffer even more because of Bedell. I'm sure Bedell is very cranky now that he can't find any real relief to his errm . . . problem. Morgan seems to be a good man but just not accepting to how things are with the unicorns, not that I blame him I'd want to help Regan too. Can't wait to see what you have in mind for the story next. Keep up the good work and take care.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Can't wait to see if Morgan actually talks to the king and I am dreading when Bedell finds out about the situation. Keep up the good work, update soon?
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!! This is DEFINITELY an original story. I have never seen writing like this before, and your idea for writing this story was really creative. I lvoe all of you characters, and can't wait to see how you handle Bedell. This is a fantastic story, I JUST LOVE IT!!! YOU ARE SO AWESOME!!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Regan! Even feeling when Bedell is with someone else! Poor thing such a bad luck being bonded to such a man. Hopefully Morgan will come up with something, confront Bedell and tell him how things are and then... then kick his ass! lol, um, yes I like it still very much, I want to hug Regan.
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh this is getting good cant wait to read more, hope to see another update soon. ^_^
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uuuuhhhhh he can tell when the guy is... with someone else?! that's kinda evil you know? torturing poor boy with his mate-not-mate mating!!! hhehehehe... I like it!!! I want to see more!! :D
Laaerie
Laaerie
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was really great! If I were doc the I would go and confront Bellel as soon as the day broke." You won't be having any sexsual encounters next 1000 years , if you wish to keep your bits in place" - That's what I would tell him! Though, doc is really soft..
Anyway , I can't wait to see the seme I'm so excited :) Patiently waiting for more updates.
Anyway , I can't wait to see the seme I'm so excited :) Patiently waiting for more updates.
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very interesting. I like the idea you started with, it kind of reminds me of 'The Last Unicorn'; a story I loved as a child. But of course that book didn't have the slash aspect to it . . . hmm, I think I like your's better hee, hee. I enjoy your characters, they are well thought out and the explainations of how things happen make sense. How is Bedell going to take to the news that he raped a virgin unicorn and is now mated to him? If he is an idiot how is Dr. Morgan going to make him understand and how will Regan react to them trying to be mates? The poor unicorn boy was so afraid when he bumped into Bedell I can imagine how it is going to go. And what about the cover story, if Bedell and Regan get together how is the village going to look at it with the cover story Dr. Morgan made up? Well can't wait to see where you go with this from here, please continue with it. Take care.