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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, cliffie! man, I can't help hoping desperately to get little regan away from the bastard. the little cuties always suck me in, LOL.
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, I'm enjoying the characters and very interested about what will be happening next.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH! How could you leave it at that?! OMG UPDATE. Lol
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had missed two chapters! I'm way behind in my reading *cries* um, well I have now catched up with you ^__^
Um, so that Bedel is really a selfish bastard ain't he? and oh no; is he a father now?? Poor Regan, he'd certainly would deserve better!
Hm.. about Morgan and Regan oneshot, well I don't think they should end up together that way. I see Morgan more like his friend and help, as a faterly figure, not as a lover. But if you want to write it then do write it! and if you do, I think I would read it just the same. ^.^
Um, so that Bedel is really a selfish bastard ain't he? and oh no; is he a father now?? Poor Regan, he'd certainly would deserve better!
Hm.. about Morgan and Regan oneshot, well I don't think they should end up together that way. I see Morgan more like his friend and help, as a faterly figure, not as a lover. But if you want to write it then do write it! and if you do, I think I would read it just the same. ^.^
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes...strangely enjoying...and obviously still reading. Hehehe. One wonders that, if Bedell were to have a *cough* fatal accident, would that free Regan?
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Regan is so cute.
I think he should come more in contact with his mate.
Please please update sooner.
I think he should come more in contact with his mate.
Please please update sooner.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 9
Hi, Kawanee,
I liked this chapter, It was interesting to see doctor Morgan (Peter or Petree?) visiting his patients and coming up with a plan to help Regan. That twist with Bronwyn being pregnant came completely unexpected. Wonder how this could be resolved.
I like a way you wright, you have a 'light hand', very nice to read:)
'No' to a oneshot of Morgan and Regan. That just wouldn't be right.
I am not sure about a character description page. People post them on the beginning of the story and there is too much to take in at ones. I just glance through and go to read the actual story. That sort of thing is better for a play script, not the story. Little bits on people's looks, age and more could be inserted in the story itself, where it supports the plot. Not too much, just enough to plant visual imagery in people's heads, hehe. Just my 50 cents.
Overall I love this story, very cool plot. Good job, Kawanee:-D
Thank you.
Hi, Kawanee,
I liked this chapter, It was interesting to see doctor Morgan (Peter or Petree?) visiting his patients and coming up with a plan to help Regan. That twist with Bronwyn being pregnant came completely unexpected. Wonder how this could be resolved.
I like a way you wright, you have a 'light hand', very nice to read:)
'No' to a oneshot of Morgan and Regan. That just wouldn't be right.
I am not sure about a character description page. People post them on the beginning of the story and there is too much to take in at ones. I just glance through and go to read the actual story. That sort of thing is better for a play script, not the story. Little bits on people's looks, age and more could be inserted in the story itself, where it supports the plot. Not too much, just enough to plant visual imagery in people's heads, hehe. Just my 50 cents.
Overall I love this story, very cool plot. Good job, Kawanee:-D
Thank you.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love these 2 chapters hope u write more soon
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm strangely enjoying this unique little story. Poor Regan. There must be a way to break the bond with Bedell, because that brutish oaf surely doesn't deserve such a sweet boy. Keep on going.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 8
Lovely update, Kawanee,
I like Doctor a lot, it's nice that Regan has someone decent taking care of him. He lives alone and Regan is wearing his son's clothes, so what happened to Doc's family? And Morgan is not a virgin girl, so his chances to talk to a King of Unicorns is zero... Exept for loopholes. Maybe if he adopted Regan or became a menthor or something, he could speack to Regan's father. Then he might have a say in this Bedell business. I suppose that unicorns do not interfere in humans affairs, but Morgan could, being a human himself.
“Tank yu brake fast.” was funny:)
Wish we had a bit more description on main characters.
All dialog is good.
Thank you:)
Lovely update, Kawanee,
I like Doctor a lot, it's nice that Regan has someone decent taking care of him. He lives alone and Regan is wearing his son's clothes, so what happened to Doc's family? And Morgan is not a virgin girl, so his chances to talk to a King of Unicorns is zero... Exept for loopholes. Maybe if he adopted Regan or became a menthor or something, he could speack to Regan's father. Then he might have a say in this Bedell business. I suppose that unicorns do not interfere in humans affairs, but Morgan could, being a human himself.
“Tank yu brake fast.” was funny:)
Wish we had a bit more description on main characters.
All dialog is good.
Thank you:)