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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I started it and couldn't stop. I especially liked Roan's characterization! Usually in a lot of similarly-themed stories the protagonist gets captured and in an unnaturally short time comes down with a heavy case of Stockholm Syndrome towards his captor. This story is really different from that and I really enjoyed reading it :) Update soon!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was really good sad but good. what happens next? more please
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so very happy to see you wrote more.wow can it get better? im so enjoying this . it very good i think.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, Blaz is more complicated than i thought.
Nice Chapter...
Nice Chapter...
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please write more.want to see what is going to happen next
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, good point. I got so use to the wolfes, well some of them, being so gentle with their mates. Oh well, I still love the story so you better hurry and update both. I really want to know what happen.
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts
Ummmm...little confusing the way this story jumps characters and chapters...but...its still good, lol..
Ummmm...little confusing the way this story jumps characters and chapters...but...its still good, lol..
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I think you're doing a great job. However, I think I like Rift better because it's got a little better flow between the chapters. This one kind of jumps to different characters more suddenly. Is that what you intended - to have it be more like one chapter per character? Otherwise, keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more.
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the heck was that? I thought abusing your beta was forbidden or least that's what I got from reading Rift.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never knew this story was here. It's really good and i hope to read more in the future.