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by jenner84

person Anon
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Marik had no response for this, and so silence and hatred and sorrow and love passed between them for a moment and then Loban spoke again."

Wow. Just wow
person tf
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I don't know what to say; everything went wrong so fast, but I don't want him to die... exile perhaps... just don't know; thanks for the update:)
person tie me up. tie me down.
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well it seems that as worried as wolves are about procretion and litters Marik is not doing a very good job as a married Alpha. Shouldn't someone in authority step in and take Roan away from him and maybe give him to someone else who's not going to be a better Alpha, if not at least place this guy on probation or something.
person littleolmee
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, such a sad chapter. Marik and Roan seem to have so many problems. What will happen to them? Will Marik be allowed to keep Roan now that he has done something that caused him to loose his litter? Their relationship was already strained as it was will it even work out for them now? Wonderful chapter, keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know i kinda of figured he was going to lose the litter.., maybe now Marik will get his head out of his furry ass.
person jenner84
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You guys are wonderful. Thank you all for staying patiently with me. I've been moving, all done now and getting settled in a new place. Writing should pick back up a bit, but to answer your question, Sara, yes, I am working on all three at once. Which means things will be a bit slow sometimes, but also means that you get three updates for the price of one!

Hope you all like the new stuff!

Thanks,
Jenner
person lilian
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, go Euan. I wonder if Roan and Marik will have a direct conversation about this soon. I definitely think the spotlight in this chapter was on the relationship between Marik and Loban, though. Thanks for the chapter!
person Sara
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello. ^_^
I've just spent two days reading all three of your stories. They are FANTASTIC!
The world and characters that you've created are very unique, I was hooked from the first page! I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for sharing them. :D
I was wondering if there's any general pattern to your posting/updating, that way I'd know when to check.(because... THREE CLIFF-HANGERS??? I mean, REALLY???)
Also, are you working on all three at once *brain hurts at the thought* or are you working on one particular story at the moment?
Anyway, thanks again!...... - Sara
*huddles in front of computer in utter suspence to wait for updates* ^_~
person lilian
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey again, hope the next update comes soon~~
person jenner84
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Recent Questions/Answers:

Bambi: Nothing in particular. It's just that Loban and Marik don't get along so well, still, and Marik doesn't want him in the house.

Jae: I know, I know. And I feel bad. Summer's just slow months. Thanks for hanging in there.

Lili: He's not going to start looking for mates for Medin; at least, not yet. And I love that you're worried about Róan, because he is miserable, but only a little bit - quiet desperation, I think they call it. It's the pregnancy, and the newness, and not knowing quite where he fits. Róan's just a big bundle of mixed emotions, is all. And confusion. Lot of confusion there. Which is where thinking Marik doesn't want the litter comes in; since he doesn't understand Marik's behavior, he makes it make sense in the best way he can. And I'll try to show a little more about Ro and Marik's intimacy, if I remember. I'd intended for the next few chapters to be a bit more Medin and Blaszni focused, but we'll see.

A question: Are you (all the readers) interested in Ethan's life on Arem'mir, or should I leave it where it lies?