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September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent story, but the ending - even if it was meant to be an open ending for a sequel - offered no closure for the story arc at all. Just a nagging feeling of being cheated out of a satisfying conclusion.
Thanks for sharing, though.
Thanks for sharing, though.
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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this series - but this was quite sad. I hope you resolve this in future writings.
VL
VL
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December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh good lord, i nearly cry,that is just...sad, lost mate,adopted child,lits...everything fudge -.-
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May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch.29
oh wow... wooooooow... i finally got to re-read this beaut.
Is this the end of it? or will there be more? this is amazing really... the depth you give your characters, the conflicts.. really amazing~ :)
joanna k.
oh wow... wooooooow... i finally got to re-read this beaut.
Is this the end of it? or will there be more? this is amazing really... the depth you give your characters, the conflicts.. really amazing~ :)
joanna k.
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1. Bait, hook, and sinker. Oh, I forgot the line. X3 The story in itself and how you introduced it has earned you a fan. I'm definitely going to keep reading.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you were right...your specialty is making dramatic pieces [*sniff] so sad
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i was just wondering if you were going to be updating any of your writings, i enjoy them much i think i've re-read them like 2 or 3 times now lol but yeah i just had noticed that i think ribbon is the only recently updated one? i was just curious if you were going to update the others as well.
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
J,
Rise is a beautiful story. Just finished it and it is so perfectly heartfelt.
Wow! Blew me away. Perfect ending.
Thank you,
R
Rise is a beautiful story. Just finished it and it is so perfectly heartfelt.
Wow! Blew me away. Perfect ending.
Thank you,
R
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a heartbreaking end! You really can´t do this to Roan, poor guy. Not only he has stayed alone but moreover he will have to mate with someone he maybe won´t even like. I think Marik was better for him, I am sure he would come to love him sooner or later. Therefore I am begging you- please, try to think about some sequel :)
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This is horrible! What happens next? So much sadness and angst.
Must
Know
Mooooooorrrre
To go with Wally can never be a good thing now can it. Foolish Melly...
Must
Know
Mooooooorrrre
To go with Wally can never be a good thing now can it. Foolish Melly...