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by edoxroyfan

person Yhitzak
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After reading this paragraph at least half a dozen times, all I can figure is that you're trying to be pretty about talking trash about the world. This could be all fine and good, except that your meaning gets lost in your prose. Clearly you have the ability to think and write, so drop the pretentions and just *do* it.