schedule
February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I've ever reviewed anything so you had better well review. Seriously, I'm dieing to know what happens next! Update!
schedule
February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a very interesting concept. Love the story idea and that Sasha sounds interesting as well.
My only problem was with the grammar. There were a few spelling mistakes - not all that many, actually - and you kept switching from present tense to past tense. Fix up those little problems and I suspect you will have a real keeper here. A good story. Good luck!
~C~
My only problem was with the grammar. There were a few spelling mistakes - not all that many, actually - and you kept switching from present tense to past tense. Fix up those little problems and I suspect you will have a real keeper here. A good story. Good luck!
~C~
schedule
February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start. Please update!