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please wite more i want to see what happen between cole and sasha.

i need more

Damn it...you are really cruel. I can't wait to read the next chapter of your story. I really like your story - especially Cole and Sasha...I hope they get real action soon. They deserve it.
I really wonder, if Sasha remembers, what happened with him, when he was posessed (well...I would say no).
And how creating Sasha worked...(ist his mother just a surrogate mother?)

So if shouting helps: PLEASE WRITE MORE (and faster).

Gosh, it's so cool! I'm crazy about your story, please, keep going!
Cole is so funny/horny, but what happened with him? I'm sure you will make something good, hope to read it soon!

ah! they did it... but not really... ugh! Is Sasha going to remember? *ponders* Oh, man, you're mean... mean, mean, meanie!!! Now they did it but not! and it's so messed up! hehehehe... I like messed up! keep on going :D I still love it!

Laaerie

Ugh this thing didn't let me log in for some reason! anyway! oooohhhh that was really cute and touching!!! it really was, to see Sang Ki's thoughts written, is was very touching! Now... write more!!! *puppy eyes*

Laaerie

Wait, wait, wait!

Are you telling me Sang Ki, the guy whose usually the hard ass to Sasha, is his father? And Sasha has another biological father along with a mother?!

Was this suppose to be a loop-hole to an MPREG? 'Cause it kind of reminds me of a scenario from a video game, Final Fantasy VII (although in that case it was two moms and one dad...)

Hey...That lemon was way to short! I get that it technically wasn't Sasha and Cole, but come ON!

Well, when you do the REAL lemon of Sasha and Cole, make it longer please! Oh, oh! And do it like in a private place; I can't imagine Sasha going along with Cole's advances with so many people around, 'specially his daddy :D

Anyways, keep up the good work. I look forward to more chapters!

Hey, you teaser! It's a good thing that you're good at writing this fic else I'd be sendiong you evil thoughts :P.

Anyways, I'm really enjoying the story, although I admit that I'm still a little confused with the characters and the names, but no biggy :D

Yes, damnit! I want a lemon next chappie. Please make it between Sasha and Cole(vampires are such sexy doms ^_-) and not some random pairing.

Anyways, keep up the good work!

THIS IS ME REVIEWING!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!

aawwww... come ooooonnnn!!!! don't leave me like this!!! I loooove Sasha... can I have him? *puppy eyes* Oh, well... if not, can I have next chappie? :D

Thanks for the update!

Laaerie