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i really enjoyed wha there is of this story and hope you plan to finish it!

you have totally hit my brotherlylovefest kink like whoa. i want jake and cam and aimon. in a big bed. with fluffy pillows. :DD

Excellent story. I really like it. Please continue

I'm glad Cithru didn't get to kill mommy...

The Nubians getting rain for sacrifices sounded good. (I've only seen one show about ancient Nubia on The History Channel - and promptly forgot everything.)

This is really good, I like it. Hope to see you write more soon.

I'm very glad to hear all the things the story will not be.

Leads me to follow it in spite of all the 'high-school boy' stuff.

Do we get to meet the demon soon?

Huh... I'm pretty impressed. It's a heck of a lot easier to read (Grammar, tense, and sentance structuring) than most everything else I've looked at on this site. I'm not a slash junky, but I like good stories, and in my humble opinion this is exactly that. However, I believe you might find it useful to enlist the aid of a competent beta reader, as I could see several subtle word misplacements, and grammar flaws of the sort that most authors never notice in their own work.
Good job, and good luck with future installments.

Very good so far, you've caught my interest and it's well written.
I'm looking forward to more, update soon?