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Okay, to be totally serious and to answer your question. I would love to see the bad guy win for once but I am a total sap and it would be sorta sad to not have a really happy ending. So perhaps you could write the ending where Cithru wins and then write an alternate ending where Aimon wins? Just a thought. And I've not reviewed before, I have a bad habit of not doing that but I think I will be more often. I've read all of your stories and I absolutely LOVE your work. Please write more! Though don't rush yourself too badly^^

Later!!

I soooo think Cithru should win, its so much more fun when the bad boy gets the prize!

I love your stories, but this so far is my favorite! I don't think you have to make Cithru the bad guy, I like him! He just needs a chance a some sweet Cam loving! Is there going to be a pairing in this story? You do a great job of putting your readers on edge and keep coming, you just cannot seem to stop reading! I hope you make the yummy Cithrus a reluctant good guy! Not all main characters have to be the perfect angel, some are that sexy evil Alpha male that you just cannot get enough of! If you read yaoi mangas then you'll notice that a lot of the semes are the kind of guy that is only good to their cute little uke, Cithru can be that kind of guy! Sorry for the long rambling, thanks for the great stories!

woah! I realy like this fic! ^^ pleas update soon!

Please update this story soon

I love where you're going with this. Great story. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

DDD: noo, jaaakeeee. i think i've developed quite the attachment to your jake, there. XD

That was a great chapter. I really liked the detail you put in describing the sword. I can not wait till your next story

Great story but please please write more!!!
I just love Cam!!!

Very interesting. I look forward to seeing where this is going and I can't help but like Cithru even if there hasn't been overly much of him yet. Anyway, keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing an update.