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by sagewhistler

person MemnochTellurium
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I say more power to the evil! <3
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
response to your question.... it would be nice if you could figure out a way for both demons to end up with cam.....that would be awesome :)
person Lasae
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I vote Aimon!

It would be interesting to have the villain win the hero(ine), but I'm a sucker for angsty semes who care too much, and Aidan looks like he could fall into that category. ^^
person Lasae
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoops I meant to say Aimon there. Heh. *blushes*
person M.R.C.C.
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel the way because I feel that in every story that I read the good guy alway win.
Cithru should get Cam but Aimon should side with cithur so that he can get on in the action
too.
person Dragonlet
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Here's a question for you, the author: What did you have in mind when you started writing the story? When you think about this story or sit down to write it, where do you see it going?
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Answer to Dragonlet: Well for me there is no clear cut ending. I don't know if your question was rhetorical or not but I'll answer it anyway. I make no webs, layouts, or what have you. I went into this thing with an appleseed and I think its well on its way to blossoming. I knew that I wanted Aimon to get with Cam and they would both defeat Cithru, but like I said a reviewer of mine got me thinking. So I decided my ending would reflect what people want to see after all I have 5 other stories with no ones say so but my own. And even after I have the results I can still choose several options. The story is still being shaped by me after all. I can couldn't tell anyone the next sequence of events b/c what I might have in store for my characters tomorrow could change four times before then.
person Vampirezdarkgurl
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wanted to say that I am really enjoying your story.And to answer your question when I first started to read this I was cheering for the Cithru/Cam pairing...and what do ya know I still am. So my answer is Cithru/Cam paring. :) Hope to see more soon.
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha yaotch.. ^^ loved the chap.. feel somewhat sorry for alex thou.. ^^ hope Cithru doesen't kill him wen heas done.. cousines??!! now this got me curious! pleas update soon^^
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cithru vs Aimon ?????? that is a hard one why not make ti into a trio. to protect him from C, A gives his mark to Cam. that way he has new 2 marks and A will feel what Cam fell from c. so why not make it into a trio!!!!