rate_review Reviews

Though it would be cool to have the bad guys win for once I just like the thought of Aimon and cam getting together. ^_^ I would so love for Aimon to win and him and cam get it on.

The bad guy should win!!! (if you want you can change him and make him good....)

Definitely let Cithru win. I'm tired of happy endings.

Hmm. Wow, I love the way you characterize Cithru and Cam. I would like to see Cithru with Cam if you twist it (bad guy getting it despite his evil past) and all that, but I think Aimon should be paired off with Cam's brother =] so he isn't lonely or anything. Haha.

Elkin makes a great point! In the beginning of the story I thought that you were going to hook Aimon and Cam's brother up, they had great chemstry going on! When you made Cithru out to be such a bad guy and it looked like the whole story was going to be about trying to find a way to destroy Cithru, (Which it sounds like it was originaly intened to be) I thought that Cam wasn't going to be paired up with anybody. It kind of looked like Aimon/Jake was going to me the main pairing and that Jake was going to be one of the main characters! It would still be pretty cool if it turned out that way XD!

Cithru! but i want Cam to be happy in the end as well.. a well..

Hmm the persen above my coment has a point.. can't it be like a J/A and C/C paring in the end?? that would be sooo cool! (HOT)

I think cithru should win and get cam and then have aimon trying to get cam back

Well .... I like Cithru better
So I would like to see him win and get Cam.

Great story by the way ^^
I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Gahhhhh! sorry riversprite77 my stupid computer I accidently deleted one of your comments. They really should have an are you sure button. >__<