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Cithru or course. He can be tamed!

Cithru and Cam belong together. It is written in fate! Aimon and Cam's brother would make a great pairing.

Oh my gosh!!!! I absolutely love the end of this chapter. I never would have thought the older brother would do something like that but it is strangely satisfying^^ Love it love it love it. Please update soon?

Oh dear. What is this silly boy going to do? Smart way to make contact though. But what will the consequenses be?

he's gonna give himslef a tatto! oh man i did not see that one coming. Thanks for the quick post!

I am loving this story. I wanted to scream when i got to the last chapter you have written so far and there was no where to go from there. I don't know who I want to win, good guy? or bad guy? Usually I like more positive endings but I do hope that Cithru gets to have his wicked way with Cam for a time. I can't wait for your next update!

Okay, I'm always hot to trot for some triumph of a more wicked and self-serving bent, but I like Aimon better. I think a large portion of us enjoy a dominant, sauntering across or along the line of good and evil flavor, but, I at the very least, enjoy knowing that there exists a deeper caring. Cithru screams of "manipulative(not in the good, rather hot way) and doesn't sare one iota of what happens to the darling that summoned him provided he gets what he wants". Arrogant? Fine. Self-interested? Sure thing, it's often practical. Willing to kill others for self-interest? It happens. Willing to snuff out the person he ought to care for? I have issues.

Well, you have my vote. I'm really enjoying it so far, and look forward to reading some of your other works, as well.
Nacht

The one problem I have with this story is the Latin. Love the plot, but I am taking Latin and the book title is all wrong. It should be something like "Liber Animi Regis". (There isn't really a word in latin for demon, so I used "spirit", but you get the picture.) Nominative form of "book" and genitive cases of "demon" and "king" that match in number and gender.

Actually, if it is "of the demon kingS" it should be "Liber Animorum Regum".

Hello, piddlin. Here's the thing I know absolutely nothing about Latin, I just entered my sentence in a latin translator and presto it gave me what you see here, so I am very sorry if its a bit annoying, perhaps I shall go back and change it, but I wouldn't suggest reading Monster there is latin in that too. lol