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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was beautiful.
The first-person perspective was a great touch, the story flowed beautifully, and your spelling and grammar was excellent. I'm very, very impressed.
Excellent work! Keep it up!
The first-person perspective was a great touch, the story flowed beautifully, and your spelling and grammar was excellent. I'm very, very impressed.
Excellent work! Keep it up!
schedule
February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the compliment!! I love feedback :D Thanks for reading my story!
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~ash~