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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
interesting beginning so far. I always seem to have problems reviewing a story at the beginning, but seeing that you didn't get any reviews yet is also very uncool. So Tae/Taylor (perhaps use only one name, it's somewhat confusing) and Elijah are interesting characters and I want to get more infos about their background and their abilities. Oh and their respective co-workers aren't that bad too ;-)
The sex scene was short but hot - there should be one in every chapter from now on :D Oh and did they take turns? You see I don't like the "traditional" uke/seme; top/bottom constellation - and Tae and Elijah seems to me like a pair that will take maximum joy out of versatile roles.
So, please keep writing and don't abandon this fic - it really is promising!
Nathaniel
interesting beginning so far. I always seem to have problems reviewing a story at the beginning, but seeing that you didn't get any reviews yet is also very uncool. So Tae/Taylor (perhaps use only one name, it's somewhat confusing) and Elijah are interesting characters and I want to get more infos about their background and their abilities. Oh and their respective co-workers aren't that bad too ;-)
The sex scene was short but hot - there should be one in every chapter from now on :D Oh and did they take turns? You see I don't like the "traditional" uke/seme; top/bottom constellation - and Tae and Elijah seems to me like a pair that will take maximum joy out of versatile roles.
So, please keep writing and don't abandon this fic - it really is promising!
Nathaniel