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Uh-oh...Martello found her! Yikes! But at least we know he can't hurt Sara--if he does, he'll be committing suicide. Rather like Edward Hyde wishing he could kill his nemesis Henry Jekyll but however badly he wants to, he can't. Like a lot of other readers, I can't wait for Sara and Martello to get together--the sex will be explosive!

Keep up the excellent work--I can't wait to read more!
Linda

Loving it! Keep it going...

Mitts

Oh...I can't believe it! That is just what I do when my story writing freezes!!!And there was me thinking I was the only one...lol..
I really like the plot line to this...it will be interesting to see if Laurence, oops excuse me, I mean Mr. Martello, seeks Sara out, and what he'll do to her...after all, he can't very well kill her, because he'll just be killing himself...But does that mean that, if he hurts her, he'll hurt himself too?
And I bet this biker chick, Charlene, is soon going to be wishing she listened to the good advice of her friend, Carl..I wonder if she's going to come out of this little liason intact?
Do you update weekly? Or just as and when a chapter is written? I'll keep checking back anyway....

Hey I like the story so far. Hope u update soon, I'd like to see what happens between the main characters.

The author's dilemma of losing everything she wrote has hit us all at one time or another..*smile*

I've never been able to figure out what goes on in "Mob" type stories. Hell, I've been watching "The Sopranos" for the entire time its been on and I STILL can't figure out who's who half the time! Anyway, I like your stories--they're always full of lots of sex and action and your descriptions of the physical/mental aspects of your characters make me feel like I'm watching from the sidelines.

I like what you've done so far--keep it up!
Linda

Well now...That really is something I never expected! But so very good! Sara, redhead of course, seems very familiar and that’s a good thing because I feel connected to her. And I don't feel that a lot when reading some stories but I tend to always with yours! I again bow down to you! I read the first two chapters and in that time you posted a third, but I am reviewing between them because...I just wanted to! I was a little bummed that the Martello you have in there seems to have lost his memory (or the stories Sara has written about him) but still has his basic instincts. And oh how I love those instincts! But I see where you are going with him...And I hope that in the third chapter I will understand better!
E.M.

Oooh, I am definitely getting hooked by this story! It did get me to thinking though--it seems too much of a co-incidence that both Martello and Sara had a borderline migraine at roughly the same of day. And perhaps Sara wasn't able to write more about Martello is becasue he can't remember who he is or figure out what is going on in himself and his new "life." Or, as Martello lives for a longer and longer period of time, would his experiences be transmitted in some way to Sara and she can see and/or write about it? Or, in the opposite case will he experience what Sara herself writes down for his character? Wow! The possibilities are mind-blowing! I can't wait for these two to get together!!

keep up the good work,
Linda