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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is SO COOL!!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It kind of took on a life of its own huh? Literally. Can't wait to see what she makes him into if not a sociopathic serial killer.
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story. I can really feel the pain this big brut is going threw. I mean how would it feel not to remember anything? Love the story Idea and the twist you put to it. I do hope you feel the need to update this soon!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god don't stop now <3 I don't mean to sound vulgar but I really can't wait till they have sex! xD
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story so far and I'm looking forward to reading more; but as a fellow author who's currently stuck on trying to complete chapter two of my own story on here I understand how you're feeling with the delay. Please take your time and if possible let me know through a reveiw of either of my stories on this site ok? Thank you and again great story!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to write more to this story?? I have been catching up with all your stories and they are very engrossing!
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kanashii, where have you been? Haven't seen you update for a while... hope things are going ok!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have just stared reading this fic! and i LOVE IT!!! MORE SOON
Jayna
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Jayna
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And? And? And? You're killing me here! Don't give up this one! Its definately different than your usual stories but I like that you are trying some new stuff. Don't leave Mr. Martello hanging now...You know he might get pissed at you. *wink*
Let me know when you've updated it dear one.
Kjoe
Let me know when you've updated it dear one.
Kjoe
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts
Oh...very very clever. Okay, I get it now. Although, I have to say, this story is completely screwing with the logics of my brain, lol..
THIS Laurence Martello is like a completely new blank page, and he wants Sara to give him a completely new life to go with it. Fair enough!
But in doing so, Sara is finding she is losing a part of herself...and lets face it, by re-writing his life story, she is. After all, the Laurence Martello she has spent almost a lifetime writing about, is being taken away from her...and even more painful for her, is being rejected by the man himself!
Oh oh...brain hurts..owwwww...
Yes, I must admit, I really really like the way you're plotting and twisting this story...bending and contorting it into the shape you want it....
It'll be interesting to see where it goes to next....
Oh...very very clever. Okay, I get it now. Although, I have to say, this story is completely screwing with the logics of my brain, lol..
THIS Laurence Martello is like a completely new blank page, and he wants Sara to give him a completely new life to go with it. Fair enough!
But in doing so, Sara is finding she is losing a part of herself...and lets face it, by re-writing his life story, she is. After all, the Laurence Martello she has spent almost a lifetime writing about, is being taken away from her...and even more painful for her, is being rejected by the man himself!
Oh oh...brain hurts..owwwww...
Yes, I must admit, I really really like the way you're plotting and twisting this story...bending and contorting it into the shape you want it....
It'll be interesting to see where it goes to next....