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for Rift. (Rewritten in 2010)

by jenner84

person Josie
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh heartache, heartache. Lovely.
person tf
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The recent update made me want to re-read and refresh my memory about all of the characters-I had to make a bit of a family tree to keep track b/c I was getting confused-is Palermo a name used for or replacing Samovar(n)-can't read my notes of how it's spelled- who is Max and Malik's brother? and even though there are a lot of names already, are you going to name Alex's lit and Damon's cubs or should we not get attached since it sounds like they get taken away young... anyway, I still love this fic b/c of the detail and unique story and can't wait to find out what happens to each of the couples next!
person Aida
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, with so many amazing characters !I'm totally hooked and I hope you'll update soon.Aida
person Itchan
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.....This story is one of the best I have ever read.....I was just looking for a fanfic to read, and came upon this one. And when I saw that it had 44 chapters I was shocked O_O I could believe it. >< I started to read it because of the Mpreg (somehow, I really just love the idea of mpreg :) ) As soon as I started....I COULDN'T STOP...I just keep reading and reading >< I had homework due the next day, but just COULDN'T stop! >< I spend like 7 hours (7pm to 2am) reading before I could stop a little to do the homework :S But even then, I keep reading it lol And well, I just finished it now, and just leaving a review :D

Now about the story. It was simply amazing. I love the characters; the stories each has, everything. But of course, there are characters and stories I like more than others, but I like them anyway :) Your writing its really amazing. I liked the way you make some of the names foreign even thought they are common names (or somewhat american) lol I usually don't like names that are that(like: John, Will, etc...), but the way you put them was cool. :) And the unique names are really awesome too, I really like them.

I really hope you can update soon, if not its ok, just don't stop writing it. I really can't wait to read more!!!! X3
person tf
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Damon and Kriston made up; I'm still worried about the threat of a challenge and hope that gets settled soon; thanks for the rest of this!
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, pleae, don't let Damon's lit be taken away from him! Kriston should try and fight for his and Damon's lit.

Will you be adding more chapters to Rise? Like I had stated in an earlier review that so much was left up in the air. Do so hate cliffhangers.
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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100 reviews! What awesome story!
person ACR247
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write! At some point I get confused because I haven't read the whole thing through in a while, but I love it just the same. The characters are all very real and I love the way that the wolfes and the humans interact, the culture changes and everything. Keep up the wonderful work!
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well-that was different. Poor Alex. Good thing Jara decided NOT to say anything about his, um, little discretion. Not after Dani's little bombshell.

Didn't Kriston tell Damon that his sister committed suicide? Guess Damon is already feeling guilty for telling Garron and Kriston where his people were hiding in order to get his two little ones back.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
person tf
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see a bit of Rift and can't wait for that update!