rate_review Reviews

I really liked Jara's scene in this chapter, it was very funny how he interacted with the wolfe, and also how he loses his sleep because Alex and Gaaron. I hope we see more of that wolfe and him. Also, I wonder whether there's something new and different about Alex, if he can hear heartbeats? Then there's Damon and Kriston. It's so depressing. I wonder how Damon is going to react if a lot of his clan gets captured, and I wonder how people from his clan are going to react to him for betraying them. And what if the people captured already have lovers or are older, like Kriston's parents? Do they get released or something, like the elders in Rise? Or what if they refuse to be seperated? Aah so many questions. This is a real cliffy, can't wait for the action. (And also a question I was thinking about, what color are Roan's hair and eyes?)

Thank you for writing!!

good ch. pretty exciting with the potential of new mates coming in. Jara's scene was cute. wonder who the wolf was...

I'm lovin it! Keep 'em comin'.

poor day, that was a tough choice.

The change in Damon's demeanor from his arrival to now is so sad. But I guess it is understandable since two of his pups are gone now. Oh this chapter was depressing. I wonder what'll happen now. I'm presuming that when Damon's clan comes by, Kriston and the other wolfes will raid them or something. Also, I thought this chapter showed how Kriston really does love Damon and worries about him. Thanks for the update!

Update sooner.
I feel so sorry for Damon!!!

I like your story line and how you've created this world. However I can't help being lost sometime in the storyline. Sometimes I feel that the story is too fast and it would be nice to tell more how the progress in the relationship between alex and Garon goes. In addition, the first few chapters you've introduced Alex in a quick brief manner then you began to switch the focus to another characters. As a reader I can't help to want to know more about the main characters before the subsequent ones. But all in all I like the story.

I love your story so much ^_^ Kaz's past is really sad T_T

I have to say, I stumbled in this category not expecting much, but I saw your summary and the codes that went with it and I was pleasantly surprised. I really like your stories. I like this one most of all, but can't wait for all 3 to be updated soon.

This is one of those reviews...

I'M DYING FOR AN UPDATE!! Please update soon, rift, rind, rise, anything, I think I've read them all about 5 times over each now, hahaha. Anyway, hope you're having a good summer!