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for Rift. (Rewritten in 2010)

by jenner84

person lala11
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey thanks for the new chapters of rift and rise. Just one question - what/where is Arem'mir?
person jenner84
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Arem'mir is the Wolfish home.
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I could almost see Damon tearing his mate a new one.
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE UPDATE U RULE PLZ PLZ PLZ
person Jenner
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, lili, you're even more of a sweetheart for going to all that trouble for me! thanks a million! updates soon, everyone!
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story much to my husbands consternation (too much time online). Have you looked into getting published; print or ebook? The only thing I saw that I would change is the Russian transliteration, it makes it a little harder to figure out what is being said sometimes, but it's not enough to take anything away from the story's flow or plot. I really hate to logoff but I'm looking forward to logging back on just for this story. Truly inspired.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Zechariah he sounds cute
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was kinda sad. Damon is really coming apart.
person lilian
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, actually I didn't draw them! sorry if I was misleading. They're actually commissions (there's this site with a lot of artists, like an interactive forum site that is a bit addictive, and if you pay them with enough of the "items/gold" on that site they'll be willing to do it for you. fortunately I have stuff, rofl); I had others do them by description.
person Seryllis
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter. The outburst of Damon was quite touching. The atmosphere was very intense. Good work.