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for Rift. (Rewritten in 2010)

by jenner84

person lilian
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It feels like there's a shift through everybody's moods and actions. I really felt bad for Jara when Gaaron got angry with him. Zechariah and Metabailiff's scene was pretty romantic though. Can't wait to see where you go with this! Thanks, hope there's more soon
person mm-chan
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaahh poor Damon :(
person livid fire
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sammelin is jelaous?
or am i wrong?
i'd like to know more about his feelings.
person lilian
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to seeing how Damon will react to the news. The interaction with his clan members was pretty sad and touching. Thanks for the update!
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a place to stop at.
person tf
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very happy to see more of this and that there'll be even more down the line; I feel bad for Damon but I can't blame his family either because he did betray them; Damon's just going to have to move on because he did put himself in this situation by running away and not following through on getting away or letting his children live with his family; he should try to be happy with his new family and try to make sure his old family isn't mistreated; thanks for the update!
person moimoi-chan
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i must confess to being a lousy reviewer (in more ways than one), but i have been following these stories avidly and can't wait for an update. thanks for writing!
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please
person tf
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the universe you've created; just found it yesterday but it's been great catching up on your fics; I'm especially enjoying Rift; thanks for the fun!