rate_review Reviews

Re-read, it seems like it's been forever. :). Just as great as the first few times, and I just wanted to pop in and show my continued interest and support of the story.

is this finished? ;-; i really like this story

It has been awhile since the last update of this story and Rise. Will there be updates and if so, guestimates as to possibly when?

Have so enjoyed this series. Very rich in detail that is key to building an engrossing "world" in fiction.

I hope to read more of this in the future.

VL

AFF changed the formatting on their site. Is there any way you can fix this story? It sounds interesting and I want to read it. I can't even look at it now...

Impresionante historia
me encanto el mundo que has creado y sus reglas, ahora el dulce y tranquilo Jara resulto que va a seguir luchando luego de todo el revuelo que causo, es uno de mis personajes favoritos (=3
Alex y Damon están sufriendo con todas las labores que conlleva el cargo de ser los betas de los alfas mas fuertes, aunque Damon es tan sobre protector y baya familia todas unas sorpresas ^0^
Me gustaría que continúes con la historia esta genial y esperare impaciente por el próximo capitulo =)

Aaaaah!!! This has such a different mood to the others... probably because things are more established in this storyline.. but.. wow.. complicated. Us humans really are uber retarded when it comes to such things as "instinct" and "how to procreate using melding the strongest genese vs. fodder" (fodder I say!). T_T u need to add more.. write more.. post more.. ugh.. My #3 favorite original series in line from storm constantine's ''wraeththu'' and lynn fleweling's ''nightrunner'' series.

T_______T u should get published. gah! the story! All 3 (4 now!) it's... sooo.... awe~some!! XD oh gosh..... more more more * begs like a puppy from under the table during dinner time while prime rib is being served** lol

fin.ch.17

Oh wow.. I love the re-write. Much more comprehensible and .. well.. complicated (in a very good way).

Please add more soon!!

Possibly my favorite original series right after Storm Constantine's. XD

Love Semmelin, but have grown fond of Guanaren. Will be interesting to see how it all turns out! Want more Victor/Malik please ^_^

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

Love the story ^_^
too lovly~ mt type
waiting for updates