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for The Lonely Doves

by CeroCero

schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excelente y muy buena escritura, espero que completes, porque para mi esta hitoria no est completa todabia, muy pronta actualizacion por favor: ana maria
person M'e
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am hooked already! Please hurry and write more!
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it. i think austin and the 17 year old should have a secret affair.
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I like how you establish everyone's appearance and everything before getting into the story. Can't wait to read more!