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for Heart of Stone

by psychebemused

schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I have to say that I was shocked to read all of this, a good shocked! This is amazing. Your writing is wonderful and I love your characters. The past of Aidens peoples is sad but 'real' in a way and that’s a great thing to have in a story. I do wonder about his intention though, because of how he explained his women were treated, and so I wonder about how Mary will be thought of in his mind, and treated by him. I am thinking there is more to him then meets the eyes. However, I thought the trust and romance that was between them when they made love to be wonderful, I think you have a great story here and hope you continue!

E.M.
person Nboulet
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating. Totally compelling reading. And you write very well.

Keep going!