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for Heart of Stone

by psychebemused

schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the most erotic chapter yet! I loved it! Mary should teach Aiden once and for all that he has to trust her when she goes off alone instead of jumping to the conclusion that she is running off to meet another man. I like Aiden very much but he can be such a chauvinist, it is almost maddening sometimes!

Anyway, well done!
Linda
person Shyann
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wowwww... This is a Fucktastic story....
Can't Wait For More Soon...
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I've always loved gargoyle stories, but this one has to be by far the best I've read. I like that you keep Mary her shy self for the most part (and not turn her into a nymphette the minute she mates with Aiden) and Aiden is a pretty good mix of protective, possessive and caring.

Thank you so much for sharing this great story! I can't wait for your next update.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you've updated! This is a truly wonderful story and I am getting more and more addicted to it. In this chapter in particular, you've really got a terrific way of description that is so skillfully done, the reader gets an immediate mental picture of what is going on and how Mary is feeling. Well done!

Linda
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, the bad guy makes his appearance! It's so exciting! I can't wait to see what will happen when he and Aiden meet face to face!

schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great as always... I wonder what will the old couple do after the revelation...
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very, very well done--I congratulate you on another fine chapter! I'm glad that Mary is able to speak her mind to Aidan, instead of always meekly obeying his wishes.

Terrific job!
Linda
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope you update soon. Great story!
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I wasn't sure how a gargoyle could have sex with a human and your answer was very original (and very unexpected! I never guessed it would be his tail!).

This story seems more along the lines or romance and/or erotica as opposed to horror, but that's not important. What IS important is that you have a definite knack for writing explicit scenes even if appears to be slightly non-consensual at times. I rated this story at 5 stars! Keep up the good work!

Linda
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, this has been one of my personal faves on here. Beautiful character interaction between Aiden and Mary.

Are you a fan of the Gargoyles cartoon story as well?