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Very, very nice update! Very interesting to learn about the group's existence... I hope Andy and Robbie will not react badly when they find out about Aiden and Mary! They are so right for each other! Curious to see their next actions... Excellent work! :)

You should add another spanking scene... and,

a cat and mouse scene(neener neener neener, you can't catch me).
That'd be great.

love the story.

This is so wonderful, please be ridiculously obsessive with the updates.

I have read a lot of fics... its very interesting well writen...plz update soon!!!

Wow, I'm really glad I stumbled on this story again. You updated! Great job. I'm really loving this story so far. The characters of Mary and Aiden are defined, the pacing of their relationship is smooth, and their reactions and feelings are plausible. I'm really interested to see what happens between them. I only have two suggestions. First, the ends of the chapters seem a little abrupt at points, e.g. middle of conversations, etc. I know inspiration tends to run out, lol, but watch out for that. My other suggestion is that the conversation can seem a little too formal or unrealistic at points. This makes sense with Aiden since he's centuries old but be careful it doesn't spread unintentionally. Otherwise, I think this is a very creative take on gargoyles. You do a great job of giving them a real, "human" feel. And you may want to move this story to another category so it gets more exposure. I know it's great. :) Can't wait to see the next ch., keep on writing!

That was such a sweet chapter even though filled with a lot of emotion... I'm more than curious now about that spiteful guest...
You're doing an excellent job with your story and the development of the characters. I hope Mary and Aiden will eventually work things out between them, despite their differences...

First, let me thankyou for giving me the oportunity to read your story, which I have enjoyed immensley.
The story line is interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter, and you have brought to life some wonderful characters in an almost Dickensian way. The erotic scenes are.........well... erotic, and looking a little like a gargoyle myself, have given me hope. You have an easy to read and intimate style, I almost feel as if I'm looking over your shoulder as you dance the words across the page, the story line gets sharper in the later chapters, and feel you are on the way to a very competent piece of fiction.

Oooh, this is getting sooo interesting... I'm glad Mary had that conversation with Ayden... it was much needed. I know they are very different from each other, but they have to make some "compromises" and meet somewhere in the middle. I can't wait to see the baddie's next movement... I don't think he's the person who deals well with rejection...

Nice backstory with Mary's family! It certainly fills in the gaps and only proves that her unpleasant visitor from the previous chapter was definitely up to something...

Good job!
Linda

Excellent update! The plot is getting more interesting with each chapter... and sexy!:)