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Hmmm this chapter was great.
It remineded me of those good old black&white movies where they all gather to discuss problems or the future. You perfectly managed to suck me into this conversation and it was thrilling to read. *sigh* Wonderful :-)

Wow, you're a superb writer. I am really impressed by your character's depth and "realness". I can't wait to see more of this.

First an apology for not reviewing for a while.
This chapter was great - you write great HMS.

Hi, I really thought I have put in a review before, but I just checked and I never have. Which I have to say sorry for, because I have truly enjoyed this story for a long time. So, here's my review.

I really don't know where to begin everything is great. Mary, Adien, their love, her shyness, his comfort, the mystery about her blood line. It's all wonderfull. Your writing is wonderfull. Also, I have to completely thank you for the length of each captured. As much as I always want another chapter I feel like I have gotton a good size of info from the given chapter. So thank you so much.

I could go on, but I leave my fist review with - I just can't wait to see this meeting, so please update as soon as possible.

I love this! Can't wait to read more!

And again you did it :-) more mystery, more passion and love, more tension!
No one can ask for more. Your story is so rich of detail and interesting dialogues.
I also love your erotic scenes - they're so sensual without being primitive.

Your faithful reader

a beautifully written story that I have been enjoying completely :-)

I jsut got caught up on this story and it is so godo!! I can't wait to read more!

It’s a wonderful story that never fails to keep me down in front of my computer, drinking in every single word appearing on the screen! Interesting and multi-layered as usual… exceptional language use and very successful in describing places, situations, people and scenery.
I know that Robbie seems like a very good and trustworthy person and he probably is, but I have this ugly feeling about him revealing, even by mistake, Mary and Aiden’s relationship. I hope I’m wrong.
I get so carried away when I’m reading your updates… I actually live it. Excellent work. :)

Ohh I like your Mr. B.
He appears to be a good hearted man and I found his story about his lost love very sad.
And it's good to see that your protagonist loves Aiden so much, that she carves for his closeness.
Left to hope, that the rules of old times don't get between them...

All in all, again a great chapter.