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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! I need more!!! i love this story sooooooooooooo much please please please update soon. this is one of the best stories i have read on here so far and i believe you are an excellent writer. Please give me more...pleeeeeeeease??
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! when i saw that you had updated, I freaked out. I was so excited. I hope you continue this story and update soon:)
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I hadn't noticed how long it's been since I've reviewed, so this will catch me up. I just finished chapter 23.
Firstly, the big meeting that Mary had went pretty well, except for that jerk, Andy. Also, that floating rock thing - Awesome!! Shows how strong she is and she just started using her magic.
Of course, I as so HAPPY about the BABY, I can't wait til the birth. I noticed she didn't tell Aiden about seeing Darren Rathbun, but she knows he's bad news. Does he know about the baby? He would have to after seeing her in a baby shop, right? Is anyone else going to notice she pregnant? Will the baby add to her magic, when will her cravings start, WHAT will her cravings be?
As you can see I now have a million question - so please update soon.
Firstly, the big meeting that Mary had went pretty well, except for that jerk, Andy. Also, that floating rock thing - Awesome!! Shows how strong she is and she just started using her magic.
Of course, I as so HAPPY about the BABY, I can't wait til the birth. I noticed she didn't tell Aiden about seeing Darren Rathbun, but she knows he's bad news. Does he know about the baby? He would have to after seeing her in a baby shop, right? Is anyone else going to notice she pregnant? Will the baby add to her magic, when will her cravings start, WHAT will her cravings be?
As you can see I now have a million question - so please update soon.
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't really looking forward to the inevitable pregnancy angle, but I'm glad you've updated, because I really like this story. It's interesting, original, and hey, how often do you get tail play and spanking in the same piece of fiction? *grin*
I'm curious to see how the dramatic tension plays out, and if my theory -- that Aiden really is much more evil than he's coming off as -- will play out as I think it will.
Regardless of how the story goes, I look forward to more.
I'm curious to see how the dramatic tension plays out, and if my theory -- that Aiden really is much more evil than he's coming off as -- will play out as I think it will.
Regardless of how the story goes, I look forward to more.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am completely captivated by this story ---- I love it.
Please do not give up your writings --- you are very good and if you could find the person to do it simple illustrations at the front of each chapter would add a lot --- maybe some "woodcuts" or simple inked drawings.
Your insight into each bit of the story is great --- from the descriptions of Aiden to the medical work up for the pregnancy --- am on pins and needles waiting for the rest of the story --- I love your work
Jerry
Please do not give up your writings --- you are very good and if you could find the person to do it simple illustrations at the front of each chapter would add a lot --- maybe some "woodcuts" or simple inked drawings.
Your insight into each bit of the story is great --- from the descriptions of Aiden to the medical work up for the pregnancy --- am on pins and needles waiting for the rest of the story --- I love your work
Jerry
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is too wonderful to stop where it does...
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I lost this story for a while and when you posted your last update, I found it again. I missed it; I really liked the way you developed your characters, and while I'd never really thought of it before reading this story, the fact that Aiden has a tail really can be quite hot. Though I think I'd probably use it more for punishment than for pleasure... but that's just me. Still, I bet that the main character in my latest story would adore it if her master had wings in which to wrap her up and hold her.
Now that we're getting into the magic part of the story, I almost feel like I may have missed something, but then, much like the Anita Blake series (in the early books), the fact that gargoyles exist almost guarantees there are other magical forces and beings on the planet.
I look forward to your next update, and also to the next time Mary gets spanked. But that's just because spanking is my personal favorite kink.
Now that we're getting into the magic part of the story, I almost feel like I may have missed something, but then, much like the Anita Blake series (in the early books), the fact that gargoyles exist almost guarantees there are other magical forces and beings on the planet.
I look forward to your next update, and also to the next time Mary gets spanked. But that's just because spanking is my personal favorite kink.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. I think there is a baby on the way!! I cant wait to see what the baby is like!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When are they gonna have babies? :whines: I have been waiting for so long! I wanna see what a gargoyle halfling looks like from your perspective. T.T
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an astounding piece of writing. Bravo Maestro. I love this, dearly. The dialouge the subtle edge of pain and pleasure, fear and love. Magnifico.