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I had to read long and hard before I could decide if I was really going to like this story or not because of how often Mary seemed to be getting hurt. I decided though that I can deal with it because her mate is trying and it does seem to be getting better. Not my usual sappy romance but I like it still.

So, I just found your story and I must say I love it. Speaking as a person who generally keeps to the SLASH side of writing, it's always wonderful when I find a heterosexual couple to be fond of.

The balance they strive for between their cultures is fascinating, and I like that while Aiden is technically dominant he doesn't simply order her around constantly. He's not a tyrant but if also helps her to keep her sense of identity by avoiding feeling oppressed.

Darren Rathburn sounds like a smarmy pedophile and kitten torturer. End of song.

I just finished chapter 11, and Aiden discusses how his kind were not considered attractive to humans and Mary said that she saw beyond that. I'd understood that she found him handsome, but maybe you were talking about how she no longer even considered the enormous physical differences(i.e.: horns, wings, and tail). Cause I gotta say, this idea of gargoyles put me in mind of the early 90's Gargoyles cartoon, Aiden reminding me of Goliath, who was most definitely one of my first cartoon crushes as a child.

Delightful, I can't wait to catch myself up and see where this goes.
Nacht

sad bur sweet chapter. loved it :D

This is an outstanding story. I am very impressed with how well it flows, and the easiest way to tell it is a good tale is simple. It kept me up 5 hours past when I should have been asleep! ^_^ Great job!

Please update soon! Since this is an original piece, I hope you'll get it published as soon as your finished. : )

eep XP *excited!* so good! i need the next chapter NOW! please write more and more and more chapters!

Hi,

I just had to say what a fabulous tale you're spinning! It's 1.12 in the morning but once I stumbled across this I simply couldn't bear to leave any part unread! My fault for starting a story at 10 at night... The whole thing is amazingly original, although I hope you won't mind me saying that some elements, especially Aiden's wings and belted loincloth did call to mind the Gargoyles animated series - am I mistaken or are there some parallels between Aiden and the character of Goliath? Perhaps it's just my interpretation of your description?

You do weave a beautifully descriptive scene: the 'evil villain' is suitably unctuous and creepy, and fits the role to a 'T', while the door slamming scene had my neck hairs prickling! It's also a delightful discovery to find excellent grammar, punctuation and phrasing.

Needless to say, having found your wonderfully entertaining story, it's been immediately added to my bookmarks, and I shall await the next chapter with anticipation.

'Purr

I loved it!
I've been following your story since you first posted it.
Please continue.
You have a wonderful way of writing.

Review Chapters 24 - 26.

Well, I glad the preganacy is going well. I like that she finally found some info on herself - "the untrained Beeson daughter". The best part was that their union was written in a procphecy like book. This story just gets better and better. Of course, I know it not right and everyone will just be even more uncomfortable around him. But I don't care - please have Aiden do something to that Ron guy who called Mary a moster's whore. Also, I do hope she can wake Esme, am looking forward to seeing how she will react to the new would around her.

Just have to say your writing is great and your discription about everything is perfect.

Looking forward to your next update - as always.

I love this story. I finished it in one sitting. PLEASE continue. Wonderful job.