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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very entertaining. The characters were developed well. I think you are right, Armor, and this would be a good foundation for a series/set of sequels.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story!
I liked the idea of the tokit creature, aswell as a heroine with faults :)
Keep it up! I'm looking for the sequels you said are going to happen ;)
I liked the idea of the tokit creature, aswell as a heroine with faults :)
Keep it up! I'm looking for the sequels you said are going to happen ;)