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please tell me she doesn't get raped in this one, it was what disuaded me from the last story. So far I like this one.

Damn great start. Not many fae stories on here, but this one is good. Hope you update more often cause i can't wait to see what happens next. HEHEHE

I was liking the other but this one is great. Keep going.

So far I like this version better than the other, I hope you don't have her raped by that guy in this one I want her to be with Coran for her first time. So right it that way. PLEASE?

Yo. I'm back... Yeah.

Great second chapter. Yeah, no lie. Yeah.

...Man I just can't think of what to say for some reason. XD Anyway, I've read the original version to this story and I must say, this re-write is much more... impressive? I guess that's the right word.

Anyway, looking foward to the next one.

Snidne, out

I like it! Not to keen on the whole thought-reading part...I wouldn't want anyone digging through MY head, but I guess it does fit the story. So I hope you have enough reviews now, because I love your characters and I want to read more!

Ah yes... everyone loves the wily independant girl who insists on doing things her own way. Well, I know at least I do.

Please update quickly... And try not to have to wait for X amount of reviews before deciding to update. Not many people can decide for themselves whether or not a story is a good read just on the first chapter alone. (Unless of course, you happen to be a popular author around here or make a VERY good impression on your first chapter, although both of which take some experience.)

A good start. I like this Arielle girl (other than reading Cosmo).

If you keep updating, and not just bumping to be at the top of the page, i'll keep leaving feedback.