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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please tell me she doesn't get raped in this one, it was what disuaded me from the last story. So far I like this one.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn great start. Not many fae stories on here, but this one is good. Hope you update more often cause i can't wait to see what happens next. HEHEHE
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was liking the other but this one is great. Keep going.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far I like this version better than the other, I hope you don't have her raped by that guy in this one I want her to be with Coran for her first time. So right it that way. PLEASE?
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo. I'm back... Yeah.
Great second chapter. Yeah, no lie. Yeah.
...Man I just can't think of what to say for some reason. XD Anyway, I've read the original version to this story and I must say, this re-write is much more... impressive? I guess that's the right word.
Anyway, looking foward to the next one.
Snidne, out
Great second chapter. Yeah, no lie. Yeah.
...Man I just can't think of what to say for some reason. XD Anyway, I've read the original version to this story and I must say, this re-write is much more... impressive? I guess that's the right word.
Anyway, looking foward to the next one.
Snidne, out
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Not to keen on the whole thought-reading part...I wouldn't want anyone digging through MY head, but I guess it does fit the story. So I hope you have enough reviews now, because I love your characters and I want to read more!
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes... everyone loves the wily independant girl who insists on doing things her own way. Well, I know at least I do.
Please update quickly... And try not to have to wait for X amount of reviews before deciding to update. Not many people can decide for themselves whether or not a story is a good read just on the first chapter alone. (Unless of course, you happen to be a popular author around here or make a VERY good impression on your first chapter, although both of which take some experience.)
Please update quickly... And try not to have to wait for X amount of reviews before deciding to update. Not many people can decide for themselves whether or not a story is a good read just on the first chapter alone. (Unless of course, you happen to be a popular author around here or make a VERY good impression on your first chapter, although both of which take some experience.)
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A good start. I like this Arielle girl (other than reading Cosmo).
If you keep updating, and not just bumping to be at the top of the page, i'll keep leaving feedback.
If you keep updating, and not just bumping to be at the top of the page, i'll keep leaving feedback.