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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i spent all night reading this over 10 hour 0_0 slow reader well plz god plz dont tell me thats how it ends i need a happlyever after or at least a they all die the end i can take clif hanger endings they drive me mad -_- well i just have to stay taking i spent all my sleeping time reading this that yes i realy realy good and i realyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy want to see more of this story unfold but if ever chapter would be this big then i can understand if it take u alittle bit lol but plz plllllllllzzzz dont end this story like this plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz well time to go to work sleep as usaly CURSE U AFF (jk) ^_^
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story! So well-written and hot!
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. Well written, although somewhat confusing (for 5 seconds) with no chapter or paragraph breaks.
Congrats on writing a brillant story, I hope to read many more stories from you. And hopefully another chapter to this story.
Congrats on writing a brillant story, I hope to read many more stories from you. And hopefully another chapter to this story.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was a great story!! are you goin to keep goin? The end was like whoa didnt see that comin!
Tabby
Tabby
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Think you could divide it up into chapters? It's tough when it's all one chapter.
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG awesome story!!! So hot, is it a one shot or are you going to continue?? I hope so cause I wanna read more!!!!
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