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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy linda, muty erotica y muy bien escrita, lastima que se enriede la hija ertica y el final muy tortuosom pero me encanto, ana maria
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a good story I really liked the love between Leah and Rob until Leah's mum mentioned that Leah is Rob's daughter. Please update or continue. I want to know if Leah's mum is just saying that Rob and Leah are father and daughter to stop Leah seeing Rob to me it sounds like mum is jealous.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! this should be made into a porno!!!
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what I'm supposed to write but I just had to tell you I thought that story was amazing and I absolutely loved it. Thank You
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fuckin' hot. I mean really hot. The ending was so fucked up. I mean...it really messed me up. When I read that she was his daughter, I was in complete shock. I guest you better be careful who you are with because you never know you might be related.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! Fantastic story!
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG you better plan on doing a sequel or something cause i want to know what happened to their relationship!!! you better update soon!!!!!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. That's all that I can even think to say. One would think that it would be overwhelming with the length but in reality? It's one of the best ones I've ever read! I hope you continue to write and post here!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! What a way to end it! Oh my god! That was nuts. Great story though.
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy freaking crap. Best story I have EVER READ!!!! Are you going to continue this?
I sincerely hope so, because a lot of things were left unsaid.
One suggestion about this story- It's a very huge task to read in one sitting.
You might want to consider dividing it up into chapters and then re-posting it.
Don't stop writing, you've got some true talent. 10/10!!
--Radgar
I sincerely hope so, because a lot of things were left unsaid.
One suggestion about this story- It's a very huge task to read in one sitting.
You might want to consider dividing it up into chapters and then re-posting it.
Don't stop writing, you've got some true talent. 10/10!!
--Radgar