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Chapter 3 review -

I'm so sorry. Somehow I lost this story and just found ir again.

I've told this to another author recently, too - your story deserves so many more hits and reviews than it's received.

Of course, I'm a sucker for pretty boys who find themselves in nasty circumstances...

Finished chapter 10!

Very nice training so far. Looking forward to Shinji taking over. Will he or will he not break Evan completely?

If you get a chance, you might want to google 'Savage Love'. Dan thinks more or less like the ancients did - a pretty body is a pretty body. Gender comes second. (If at all.) Only modern day sensibilities have added the lables of gay and straight.

And, as a side note, thanks for reviewing "Nicea's Story". There seems to be a group of us slash fans who eventually find each other ;-))

10...another chapter already? Thank you! You're so good!

Thanks also for answering my questions...I know what you mean, you can't answer everything if it gives the plot away!!

Being my own beta, too, I know feedback helps immensely! I have changed my stories more than once from the advice from readers. But anyhow...

Yup, Evan is in BIG trouble...seems he also doesn't have his memory back yet, it'll be interesting when he does..(if he does)

Can't wait to see where this is going, I have my suspicions...but I promise I'll be patient. =)

Sort of patient...since now I'm hooked on your wonderful story...

Okay, okay I'm reviewing! read to chapter three and a shameless plug... *grin*

Great so far, different and interesting!

I have about a thousand questions but that's what stories are for...so I'll hold off for now on them.

It's like Evan has two lives, or that's just how it seems so far. What did he do to loss a million dollars in just three years?...not just that 20 here and there he's shorted... errggg...I have to stop, like I said lot of questions.

This plot is already thick, talk about your bad day...

Very well written, great dialog and thoughts, realistic... I'll be reading more... thanks.

Read three more chapters

The last chapter was cute, Evan spying on Joey in the shower. *smirk*

I'm really liking this story more and more. The chapters are short, but you put up alot at once so that's fine...anyway I'd rather have short and done well than long and forced.

Still have same questions...

And Evan's in trouble, I haven't forgotten the disclaimer, is he going to be given a choice? Be killed or work off his debt? That's what I'm guessing.

Later...

Chapters 7 8 and 9

I really love your story, but I'm still confused, too. Like, one of the first chapters, Evan isn't gay, then in these chapters he's looking at another guy and thinking he'd be drooling over him if not for his cruel eyes?

Three years, he would've been fourteen/fifteen, how could he have been trusted to build up such a debt?

He's all beat up, hard enough to give him a concussion, blood all over him and memory loss, and he's naked but he looks angelic? Not pitiful?

His role at the club, if he's underage? Or maybe it's okay to have that job if he's just a waiter...can he serve drinks?

Me sorry, but I know it helps me when people point out stuff like this. Maybe I'm just dense. =)

Anyway, poor Evan, now he pays, will Joey rescue him?

I find so many good stories and authors here I'm totally amazed!!!

More chapters very soon would be much appreciated. Thanks for sharing this!

CHAPTER 9
Hi, Black Opal
Welcome to the Slash Section! *hugs* I am so glad that you've decided to post here. I don't go to other sections often and miss on good stories because of it. This made me think about making a list of Slash Favourites and posting it in Rants/Journals. At least I'd be able to keep track of good fics.

I do like this fic a lot and really want that update! This is so well written:) Chapter 10 soon?

Thank you:)