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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you're not satisfied with what you've written - revising is the only way you'll be happy.
And a happy author is a productive author.
Thanks for telling us - and good luck!
And a happy author is a productive author.
Thanks for telling us - and good luck!
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Examples....Basic helping around the house, keeping yourself healthy and strong, servicing me on all fours...ok so my sick twisted little mind added that last one but that's what he ment to say lol
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh - this short chapter is frustrating! Want to know SO badly what master id going to do - and how Evan is going to react.
Hope your muse gets busy over the weekend... Truly love this story.
Hope your muse gets busy over the weekend... Truly love this story.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic feel to how Shinji trets Evan, he doesn't seem to mind either. I like the way he's firm but forgiving.
May not be so bad to be a slave to him, but for how long? How long does he owe this?
Usually I get a feel for where a storys going, but not this one. Surprises are fine, and I like these two together. Evan seems to be very accepting, is it the memory loss or just his nature?
Anyway, good chapter(s), you know what to do now...and thanks.
May not be so bad to be a slave to him, but for how long? How long does he owe this?
Usually I get a feel for where a storys going, but not this one. Surprises are fine, and I like these two together. Evan seems to be very accepting, is it the memory loss or just his nature?
Anyway, good chapter(s), you know what to do now...and thanks.
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story a lot and I am eager to see what will come next.
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February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're still teasing... but very, very nicely. That was a lovely scene.
And I'm sure it confused the hell out of Evan.
And I'm sure it confused the hell out of Evan.
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February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh - you are EVIL. Wretched, wretched place to leave us.
(Of course, that's what makes a good author - always leaving your readers panting for more!)
Looking forward to the next steps of training...
(Of course, that's what makes a good author - always leaving your readers panting for more!)
Looking forward to the next steps of training...
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February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My you certainly have a mean steak in you don't you.
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 10
That was fast! Thank you. I really did wander what that training would entail. Hell, they are using stun-guns on low setting or something. This is pretty heavy. 'presenting himself in this way' training was hursh, I can see where this may lead... That blowjob training made me worry for real, this is a second person who Evan was made to have sex with and he was in Shinji's posession on the second one. So, it was a part of training instructions and Shinji approved of it? Does he plan to rent this boy out or something? Like 'other pets' ?To earn the money back? So far I see that Shinji likes Evan very much but only because he is a beautiful boy. And an investment. He doesn't love him (yet?)or respect him. I wonder if this would change as Shinji will actually get to know Evan as a person. So far this plot is captivating and I am eager to see where you'll take it. Good job on training part!
About posting in two categories:
To answer your question, my opinion is to keep it going in both and see what happens.
I have a Harry Potter story posted on AFF and six other archives. Reviews I get from them are so different in quantity and quality, you can see that there is a different crowd in every place. A few people reviewed on more than one archive, so some people are all over the map. Most people, though, just stick to one. I think that this might be true for different categories on AFF as well. You already have a fanbase built in the Darc fic, so keep it going for them. It is not too repetitive at all:) It would be interesting to compare reviews from both sections after another ten chapters and see how things are developing. Of course, that is what I would do, you don't have to do the same as this cool story is your property:) I'll be reading it no matter what you decide:-D
That was fast! Thank you. I really did wander what that training would entail. Hell, they are using stun-guns on low setting or something. This is pretty heavy. 'presenting himself in this way' training was hursh, I can see where this may lead... That blowjob training made me worry for real, this is a second person who Evan was made to have sex with and he was in Shinji's posession on the second one. So, it was a part of training instructions and Shinji approved of it? Does he plan to rent this boy out or something? Like 'other pets' ?To earn the money back? So far I see that Shinji likes Evan very much but only because he is a beautiful boy. And an investment. He doesn't love him (yet?)or respect him. I wonder if this would change as Shinji will actually get to know Evan as a person. So far this plot is captivating and I am eager to see where you'll take it. Good job on training part!
About posting in two categories:
To answer your question, my opinion is to keep it going in both and see what happens.
I have a Harry Potter story posted on AFF and six other archives. Reviews I get from them are so different in quantity and quality, you can see that there is a different crowd in every place. A few people reviewed on more than one archive, so some people are all over the map. Most people, though, just stick to one. I think that this might be true for different categories on AFF as well. You already have a fanbase built in the Darc fic, so keep it going for them. It is not too repetitive at all:) It would be interesting to compare reviews from both sections after another ten chapters and see how things are developing. Of course, that is what I would do, you don't have to do the same as this cool story is your property:) I'll be reading it no matter what you decide:-D