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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay, anoter chaper! i reelie luv tis ficcie sooooo much! i tink eric shuld hav benn ezier on sal... it wasnt his falt! tis is a reelie gud ficcie n i wan to reed mor!
schedule
February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can only congratulate you on your persistance. Spelling still gets a failing grade, some parts are not comprehensible at all. What did you mean by: "i shak 'im n say now u see ho iz gooda u gonna let me do u u fakin hore"? And is sal angry at eric at the end? You seriously need to start working at school and LEARN some spelling for goodness sake!
schedule
February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're just adorable! =)
schedule
February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
STOP. Please, stop! I know, we don't have to read it if we don't like it. But you're going to lure people in. innocent people! Look at your intro, the description for the story. It's written in english, it makes it seem like it's almost going to be good. Please, please, I implore you, stop writing or go to school. The TWO people who said they like it have to be lying or they're different accounts of yours.
schedule
February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story really actually made my day. :D
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... i think you have done it.
worst story ever written.
give this writer the award.
please spare us from another chapter.
i shant be reading it.
get some english lessons.
then get a beta
even then dont start writing.
i am sorry but... i want back the time i spent reading it.
if u need help i will be more than willing to give it to you.
-ero
worst story ever written.
give this writer the award.
please spare us from another chapter.
i shant be reading it.
get some english lessons.
then get a beta
even then dont start writing.
i am sorry but... i want back the time i spent reading it.
if u need help i will be more than willing to give it to you.
-ero
schedule
January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
edit* if you want help..
its obvious you need help.
lol.
its obvious you need help.
lol.
schedule
January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED EET! <3
WRITE MORE!
WRITE MORE!