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I agree.. something is wierd about this!! I was drawn in thinking the story was going to be good and I couldn't understand much of it at all... but I am even MORE stunned that it had a 5* rating!!! If all of you rated the story as the 1 star that it deserved.. innocent people like me wouldn't be lured in by it.

I hold you ALL responsible for the time I wasted on this story, and will not get back! Plus it makes me wonder how this story got so high a rating.

I'm concerned... very very concerned!

Wow. I kind of feel bad since I understood half of it.
I shouldn't even be able to understand any.
Uh right.
Did you go to English class?
It's not that hard to spell correctly. Y'know... with punctuation. And periods.
Maybe even full sentences, OH MY GOSH!

Is this even English?

It seems like spanglish or something.
Riiight.

Good job entertaining me with several minutes of trying to figure out what you typed.

haha, you made my day, you funy nut cracker, lol. That is some fucked up English I tell you, very fucked up.

Well that was... interesting to say the least...first of all because English is not my native language and so I had a difficult time reading and understanding the text. No offence but I like my stories to be with full words and a little more complex than that.

Yours was short and to the point. In matters of challenges... it was a good one, having to read the chapters and understand the plot. I practically had to read out loud :P

What made you write this story? Like this?

Are you serious?

ROFLMAO!!!! I want the next installment now!!!!!!!

Honesty, you people are all taking this way too seriously. If this person can write a decent summary without any grammar errors, then most likely he/she can write correctly. Which leads me to conclude that this has to be a joke story. After all, despite how BAD someone's English can be, it can't possibly be to this degree.
And well, if I'm wrong and somehow this person's English is really that bad... then I'm going to be utterly stupefied.

To the actually author of this unique story... If this is a joke story, you sure got a laugh out of me for rallying up all these people up. If not, I... don't know what to say. :x

dis is teh besst ficcie eva! i luv how u devlop teh charakters n i wan to reed mor! tat jamal guy sound lik a jerk, i wil kil im. i fell so srry for teh charkter! plse updat son, i wil wate.

Well I have to say it was an interesting ... experience. I had to read that ficcie aloud to even understand it. And believe me, as a teacher I have PLENTY of experience reading the so called 'esseys' my students present me sometimes. Congartulations on getting me totally confused. And I do wonder why you posted it. I mean the net is free for all but ... if you want to post something, try to make it at least readable. And ... I don't want to sound bitchy but don't expect people to tell you it's a masterpiece or be nice to you because you asked them. As I said the net is free for all ...

somehow i forgot how bad chapter 1 was...

cause for some reason i clicked on chapter 2.

i was quickly reminded of the horribleness

please....


stop!
turn away from writing.

it is compelling u to stop.

listen to the words...
that actually are in freaking english!

going to vomit now.
-ero