rate_review Reviews

great story :)

Aww..Sean..how cute and complimenting. adorable. Short chappy but it's what I managed tomake it to before I got bogged down. This weekened though..I'll read it all. I'll finally get a break! ugg..okay..so I have to go because my kids are demanding I be a mom.

Laters

Starfyre

Just started the story but catching first chapter. I think I have a story, unpublished, tucked away inmy file about an interracial pairing. Though a different plot, I can the potential and I haven't even gotten to chapter 2 yet.

Cruel mom..that is to say..being so closed minded about things. Or..we assume. I don't know for sure but I wll keep reading.

Thanks for the reviews on Caballo and I hope you get more here.


Starfyre

I've just got to tell you how MUCH I enjoy your story. This one is so...unlike, anything I've ever read here. It's got personality, the POV in which you tell the story is an interesting bland of first person and omnipresent. You can feel the emotional conotation, through the detail, but more importantly...what you DON'T include...it tells a very...deep, story. I love it.

sorry...*Blend....definitely not "bland" lol there I go with my "atrocious" grammer and spelling. Argh, lazy, stupid me! LMAO.