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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol yayyyyy its gettin more et more exciting
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, it's hard to decide on any particular pairing, as there seem to be so many opportunities for different ones. I think that George and Beavis would be interesting, though I think that Tom and George is sweeter, as they seem close anyway, and it looks as though they would move quite smoothly into a relationship. I would like to find out more about Burleigh, as he appeared once in the first chapter and hasn't been mentioned since. He intrigued me. Before I make a definite decision on the pairings I would like best, I would quite like to see how they interact more, and for their relationships to deepen; though at the moment, I'm liking Tom and George best. Keep up the good work!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh i hope it gets to the sex son, george and tom, that would be a good mix or burleigh nudge nudge!
maybe a bit violent!
haha
o well this story is highly interesting and kept me gripped!
well done ichigo-chan!
maybe a bit violent!
haha
o well this story is highly interesting and kept me gripped!
well done ichigo-chan!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far, just from the title you can tell that it's awesome. I'm intrigued by several of the characters, and I do hope you expand on them in later chapters. I like the way you've started this, with lots of possible pairings, it just makes me want to read on!
I love the idea that someone has a voice so annoying they could it could make Mother Teresa kill, and yet she seems like such an honest and friendly person. Poor girl! I also think that Stealth having anger management issues is quite fun, though poor boy, getting bullied for looking like a girl.
I like the jokes you've weaved into the story, it's a lot nicer than all the angsty fics out there, and the whole style of the story is refreshing. Keep updating as fast as you do and I may buy you a kyuubi plushie! Well done, it's amazing for a first story. I can't wait to see who George ends up with...
I love the idea that someone has a voice so annoying they could it could make Mother Teresa kill, and yet she seems like such an honest and friendly person. Poor girl! I also think that Stealth having anger management issues is quite fun, though poor boy, getting bullied for looking like a girl.
I like the jokes you've weaved into the story, it's a lot nicer than all the angsty fics out there, and the whole style of the story is refreshing. Keep updating as fast as you do and I may buy you a kyuubi plushie! Well done, it's amazing for a first story. I can't wait to see who George ends up with...
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea of Beavis and George... is Beavis his real name or a nickname? Bevis seems to have a lot of issues, though. I guess that's what makes him most interesting. Liam is rather lovely too.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting opening, though a little fast pased. It seems like an pretty original idea (for a highschool gay fic anyway). I hope you update soon.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this as an introduction.
Sure there's not much sex but the suspense and potential for a variety of different pairings in this makes me eager to read on. I really like the potential pairings descriptions, George sounds like he may be quite a horney one. and there's no potential hetrosexual relationships which is highly pleasing, as homosexual are certainly the better ones. I am curious now to see what George would look like in a maid outfit.
Keep writing!
Sure there's not much sex but the suspense and potential for a variety of different pairings in this makes me eager to read on. I really like the potential pairings descriptions, George sounds like he may be quite a horney one. and there's no potential hetrosexual relationships which is highly pleasing, as homosexual are certainly the better ones. I am curious now to see what George would look like in a maid outfit.
Keep writing!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Can't wait until you upload.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely an interesting start. I'd love to see where this goes. It seems playful, which is a refreshing change from some of the angstier stories that have been around lately.