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for Gift of the Merrow

by CholeAsterion

schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Perfect and absolutley beautiful! I hope you have considered publishing this in an adult fairy tale book. I would love to have it in my library at home.

Your permanet fan,

Dini S.
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful faery tale. Thank you so much for writing it. I absolutely love the entire thing. You couldn't have done it better. :)
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can not believe that so few people have read your beautiful story. I love it when people put their own spins on legends and stories that Disney in all its glory has botched up. I applaud you so much right now and this has become a favorite of mine instantly.

I was so close to tears during several parts, gosh you're fantastic. This story defintiely needs more reviews.
person M
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!
person Bitsy Glitter
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. It was fantastic, so touching. You did a wonderful job conveying the emotions. And the ending where it became a tale of folklore. Did you base it on a folklore tale? great job. all the best!! BG x
person Vee
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is beautiful. Thank you for writing it, it was such a pleasure to read.
person Blackrosily
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good story^^ I loved it!
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. A different version of Mer people and I want to read more. Are you going to write more like this?
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was very beautiful. You definitely have a way with words and managed to paint a lovely story with them.